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' As her sudden mood swing started, she almost tripped but the tree supported her. She gave the old Support bringing tree a warm hug. '' Hehe.. I don't even know what that was all about..~ Oh well.'' She was talking to the tree. As always. She wouln't care if people would think she's crazy because of it, but there was no other people there anyway.
'' Nothing's going to ruin my day now, that's for sure.'' She gave a small sigh but smiled. While leaning against the tree, looking at the cloudy sky. She was very happy at the moment.
She yawned and stretched her arms, and decides to take a small nap... Under her tree.
Time passes even more faster than you could ever imagine. As a leaf lands on her face, itching her nose.. She opens her tired eyes and felt cold. She tood up and noticed it to becoming dark already. Amazed on how time runs she told tree goodnight and left it be.
As she walked home and took her shoes off, next to the kitchen. She opened the fridge as entered the room. She took the jar of milk and a clean glass. She poured milk in her glass and looked it to get filled with white liquid. She drinks the milk and with another hand she opens the cabinet of dishes. After another second she closes it again.
''What was the poin on even opening it-?'' She wondered awhile drinking. She had that 'strange' feeling with herself. Not knowin why, though. But she shrugged it off and left the kitchen and the empty glass of milk.
She scratched the back of her head as she was about to enter her room. While she noticed her little brother Matt, she greeted him. But as a return Matt didn't react to itt at all and continued his way to the living room as passing his sister. Marina felt quite ignored after that and left in her room.
After entering her room she sat down on the edge of her bed and gave a sigh of frustration while remembered that homework she had to work on still.
''Aw man-'' She complained while looking at math she didn't understand. After some time she finally finished her homework abd goes to feed her lovely pet rabbit. As she smiled to it and opened the cage to fill its empty bowl of food for rabbits.
''Enjoy~''  She was about to stroke its fur gently untill it runned in the hidey place of its, what made Marika wonder again. She closed the cage  and left it be, before she started to brush her hair with her hand. She turned to turn on her nightlight and layed down on her comfortable bed next to it. While looking at the ceiling, and thinking about  her life.
She turned to lay on her tummy and looked around her room in silence.
''........Huh?'' As she noticed something unoriginal. She was missing her own shadow.. It started to freak her out as she left her room into the bathroom. She took her toothbrush and was about to- Untill she stared intendly at the mirror. She didn't see her own reflection either. Speechlessly staring, about to reach and touch it with her fingers. At the very same time she felt cold breath on her neck. She immediantly turned around, but there was nobody there. She gave a small sigh, having the idea in head that she just imagined it. After few seconds she turned her attentio back at the mirror. But she still didn't see her own reflection, it was somebody elses image, pure whiteness covering them and having dark clean skin. Who stared at her blankly with those eyes. Almost like.. Lifeless.
At that moment the alarm clock interrupted them. She glanced at the clock. ''... 6 AM..'' She sighed and placed the blanket of hers ontop of her to cover her completly. She didn't really want to wake up.
''....Was I dreaming?'' She thought about it outloud, peeking under her blanket. She finally gave up and started to get ready for school.
While yawning and walking downstairs after 15 minutes. She walked in the kitchen to pick her breakfast, an apple. She really didn't have much time to eat something better. She waved at her mom and walked outside the door. Atfer checking her bag of does she for sure have everything that's needed. She really don't want to forget anything important. And finally, she admits the fact.
And then she started the walk to the buss stop happily, while taking the first bite from her breakfast. She accidently kicks a rockinfront of her to the bushes, and hears a small sound. Out of curiosity she walks there and looks around. All she sees is the same rock and something old and dirty. She pickes it up and looks at it with big eyes. She wipes the surface of it a little bit, enought to see the title of it. ' Fate'
''Hmm..  Wonder what that's supposed to mean.. Is this a.. book? '' She gave a nervous little chuckle. As she opened it, the first page had some dirt on it. But not that much. It had something written in it; 'mirrors' She got creeps from this thing, and sreached other pages. But in vain, they were all plain empty.
She wiped some more dust off from it and placed it in her schoolbag she just opened for it.. The title said 'Fate' though. She had no idea what it was supposed to mean. Nor the first page. But she really didn't even care. But she couln't stop wondering why the book was ther, and why haven't nobody found it before her. Her mind was a tornado already from everything. Turning her gaze to the black road, She noticed something unpleasant. Her schoolbuss. It had just passed her. She had no change for her to make it anymore, since there was nobody to stop it in the buss stop. She just had became even more frustrated, and started to head back home.
While thinking of an good explanation for all of this. She lifted her look up in the blue sky, who had few white clouds floating there freely.  She started to cross the street carelessly and dropped her look to forward. It was like she would have became deaf for a moment, she didn't hear the truck that was coming that way at the same time. Untill she turned her look at it and let out a gasp. '
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Like title says- Part 2 of 6 against them Chapter x.

Gonna work on the part 3 right away tho. Starts to get interesting ; 33
//Add- also things look alot longer in wordpad

Say if there's some spelling mistakes etc. & say if it's sucky I wanna hear your opinion <'3
//Edit: fixed some words

Characters + story © ~Miitu-chan
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:iconyami-hotaru-yuko:
very well written
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~Miitu-chan Jan 28, 2013  Student Artist
thankchu : 3
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:iconjade55555:
>wo Here you one correction from me~
"She lifted her look up in the blue shy" SKY not shy xD
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:iconjade55555:
"She lift her (head) (and) looked up (at the) blue sky" 8D
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~Miitu-chan Jan 4, 2013  Student Artist
I should read those 1000 times before submitting them
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:iconjade55555:
;w; It's okay.
Atleast we can understand what it's saying >w<
Also the story is getting good xD <3
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~Miitu-chan Jan 4, 2013  Student Artist
yay~
o v o I'm glad
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~DarthCyb3r Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
God dang it Marina pay attention >:U

Marina's logic:
''Miss the buss, give up and go back home''
xDD
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~Miitu-chan Jan 4, 2013  Student Artist
She's a little absent-minded or something.-shrug-

Yup. Since why not.
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